Romantic Monday: The creator

5 Nov

It’s pretty late here and in Australia it’s practically Tuesday, but hey there’s no better time for poetry, romance and tea than the time of twilight.  So now that you have loved the whole Monday through, you can top it off with this piece. But don’t topple off out of sheer romance, I wouldn’t want you to hurt your pretty knees. And if it’s only morning for you, then the better! I’m going to be really clichéic (yes, that is a word, from now on at least) and say: Feel the love coming your way!

And if you didn’t pass out by the soppiness of the remark above, then you might be safe to read on. I seem to be full of rainbows and candy floss today, so it’s going to get pretty romantic. You have been warned.


The creator


You tattoeed your touch

onto my skin.


It stayed there, yerning, lingering

after your fingers fell accidentally,

hurriedly down my back and

the ripples they created met my spine


though it was a guitar spring,

moulded it into sweet music,

into reckless birds and breathless

moments like silver leaves, fluttering


and your sigh gave flight to them,

blew them up, up to meet the wind

and all the twinkling bells of this galaxy

as they rang with the brightest laughter,


and to this choir of cosmos our lips joined

and our hands ajoined, and our worlds sang too,

now in harmony, and I felt the spring born

from your fingertips humming inside me


when you tattoeed your love

onto my skin.


All the other beautiful shades of romance can be found here.

Wishing you a lovely Romantic Monday no. 3!

18 Responses to “Romantic Monday: The creator”

  1. thecheekydiva November 5, 2012 at 3:23 pm #

    Awesome sauce! And yes, that’s a word too. I stole it from Hotspur~

  2. hastywords November 5, 2012 at 4:22 pm #

    In love with this. Can we please write one together???

    • daydreamdaisies November 5, 2012 at 4:28 pm #

      Thank you and YES PLEASE! how do you set about it? 🙂

      • hastywords November 5, 2012 at 4:30 pm #

        email me 🙂 One of us writes 4 lines or so and the other matches pace and style and we take turns…not knowing where we will end up…it is fun 🙂 If you can’t find my email I will email you!

      • daydreamdaisies November 5, 2012 at 4:43 pm #

        Yay sounds exciting. 😀 I always wondered how you did it over distance, was imagining some telepathic connection of minds haha. But you start cause I can’t find your email, I’m poop at anything technology related. Can you find mine? :p

      • hastywords November 5, 2012 at 4:49 pm #

        OK yes. I will email you at lunch 🙂

      • daydreamdaisies November 5, 2012 at 5:13 pm #

        Can’t wait 🙂

  3. Edward Hotspur November 5, 2012 at 11:06 pm #

    Sensuous and sweet, Daisy (See, I make up nicknames for people sometimes). If the two of you write something, be sure to save lots of copies – they’re sure to catch fire…;)

    • daydreamdaisies November 6, 2012 at 7:17 am #

      I think you will be surprised by us… I am at the moment. :p

      • Edward Hotspur November 6, 2012 at 11:53 pm #

        She really brings out the best in people – and since your best is awesome… I can’t wait.

      • daydreamdaisies November 7, 2012 at 2:47 pm #

        Aww, you’re too sweet. Hoping not to disappoint!

      • Edward Hotspur November 8, 2012 at 1:45 am #

        I have faith.

  4. withheldindarkness November 14, 2012 at 12:57 am #

    The vivid imagery you create with this poem is amazingly sensual and beautiful. Thanks for sharing such feelings and moments with us 🙂


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